Punjabi Poetry and songs by Jaspreet K Mann

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Punjabi Poetry and songs by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Jaspreet K Mann » October 9th, 2009, 3:06 am

So how is this?:

Female:
Terian yaadan soniya
Sataundiyan haye menu

Male:
Din raat aundiyan menu
Yaadan haye teriya

Female:
Je raat nu bhul bhulekhe
Meri akh khul jaave

Male:
Aundiyan menu chetey
Oho saariyan gallan terian

Female:
Paiye dard judaian ardhiya
Kithe tu te kithe main ve

Male:
Paiye dard judaian ardhiye
Kithe tu te kithe main ve

Female:
Hai meri eh majboori
Gall ehe bahut goori

Male:
Main akh khola ta tu ve
Je band kara ta tu ve

Female:
Har paase takdiyan akhan
Tere vich rehndee meri jaan ve

Male:
Mere dil damakh vich tu ve
Aa saamne tu khalo ve

Female:
Paiye dard judaian ardhiya
Kithe tu te kithe main ve

Male:
Paiye dard judaian ardhiye
Kithe tu te kithe main ve

Female:
Kithe tu te kithe main ve

Male:
Kithe tu te kithe main ve

Female:
Kithe tu te kithe main ve
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby gagan » October 18th, 2009, 2:27 pm

jaspreet g likhya ta sohna hai par eh hai ki c ???????????
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Jaspreet K Mann » October 18th, 2009, 10:18 pm

thanx for replying...lol i wrote it as a song...u know the verses sung my male singer n then female singer...its just lyrics
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby dollysandhu » October 19th, 2009, 8:56 am

hey jaspreet...good oneee....
u must be wondering why there are no responses to this one
the thing is you just posted it..no intro nothing lol.it will be good if you strike a chord with the members...tell us a lil bit about you here in the introduction thread:
http://www.punjabiportal.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=19
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby rocky16 » October 19th, 2009, 10:07 am

achha likhea ji...hor koi likhat v share karo Jaspreet ji....
ਤੂੰ ਚਾਹੇਂ ਤਾਂ ਕੰਗਲੇ ਦੇ ਵੀ, ਸਿਰ ਤੇ ਤਾਜ ਰਖਾਵੇਂ,
ਨਾ ਚਾਹੇਂ ਤਾਂ ਰਾਜੇ ਤੋਂ ਵੀ, ਦਰ ਦਰ ਭੀਖ ਮੰਗਾਵੇਂ |


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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Jaspreet K Mann » October 20th, 2009, 7:12 pm

thanx guys n thanx dolly for the tip i did introduce myself in the intro thread
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby sweet_heart30384 » October 20th, 2009, 9:55 pm

jaspreet ji sohna likya likhya ji .. tussi pehle dassya e ni nahi ke tussi likya aa es karke jyada reply nahi kita kise ne mai do ku war parya v par reply ni kar skya ohs layi maafi aa ji

ik war rocky bai di gal te v gaur farmayo ji
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ਪਰ ਨੈਣਾਂ ਵਿਚੋਂ ਸਦਾ, ਹੰਝੂ ਬਣ ਵਗੇਂਗੀ, ਅੱਖੋਂ ਹੋ ਜੂੰ ਓਹਲੇ, ਪਰ ਦਿਲੋਂ ਕਿਵੇਂ ਕੱਢੇਂਗੀ......

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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby cool_deep » October 20th, 2009, 10:01 pm

tusi bahut sohna likhia hai jaspreet ji...
do share more of your poetry

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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Jaspreet K Mann » October 21st, 2009, 2:20 am

thanx guys i will. i have to find what i have and come up with new stuff because most of my writings were on my laptop which crashed n i had to reinstall my computer n everything got deleted...but no worries im coming up with more stuff :)
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Sukhjeet Brar » October 21st, 2009, 4:36 am

Sohna likhya hai..hor likht vi sanjhi karo jaspreet ji..
ਮੈਂ ਅਗਿਆਨੀ ਗਵਾਰ ਹੂੰ ,ਬੱਸ ਕਹੂੰ ਤੂੰ-ਤੂੰ....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby sunena kataria » October 21st, 2009, 5:26 pm

khoob keha ji
keep it up jaanab

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ਦਿਲ ਕਰੇ ਮੌਤ ਨਾਲ ਲੈ ਲਵਾਂ ਲਾਵਾਂ ਹੁਣ, ਕਰਦਾ ਨੀ ਚਿੱਤ, ਜਿੰਦ ਇਹ ਹੰਡਾਉਣ ਨੂੰ..

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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Jaspreet K Mann » November 6th, 2009, 2:41 am

ok here's one:

Female:
Dewaani teri main sau rab di
Kamli kita tere pyar ne
Galli galli vich paavan phera
Tere bacho hor kaun mera

Male:
Door door to tu jad takdi
Sau rab di badi pyari lagdi
Sun ve heeriye
Sun ve soniye
Pyar kara main tenu jaano vad ke

Female:
Jhali hoi phirdi
Alardh umre rog la behti

Male:
Dil vich mere tera dera
Char chuphere mukh ve tera

Female:
Deedar aj honge mere maahi de

Male:
Mulakaatan hongeean
Naale gallan hongeean

Female:
Sau rab di chana meriya
Maahi ve menu pyar hogaya

Male:
Sau rab di heeriye
Soniye ve menu pyar hogaya
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Gulabo Massi » January 16th, 2010, 4:03 am

vadhiya likhe aa jaspreet, dogane de lyrics.
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Jaspreet K Mann » January 16th, 2010, 4:25 am

thanks!
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby jagdeep101 » January 20th, 2010, 10:20 pm

Vadiya likhya jaspreet g.
ਫੁੱਲਾਂ ਨਾਲੋਂ ਸੋਹਲ ਯਾਰਾ ਸਾਡੇ ਜਜ਼ਬਾਤ ਨੇ......
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby dollysandhu » January 21st, 2010, 7:40 pm

duet e likhde tusi mostly i guess
good one ji
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby Jaspreet K Mann » January 26th, 2010, 10:30 pm

lol i like to turn it into a song with male and female lol...i will try to write solo lol:D thanks for the replies!

mausam badal gaya
saawan aan peya
dil vich khile umeedan
karn akhiyan teriya udeekan

tere pyar ne keeta paagal soniya
sukh chain mera kholiya
tenu na jaan di
na main pehchaan di
pher bi dil mera jaave teri ore
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby dollysandhu » January 27th, 2010, 1:43 pm

first time..duet ni hega lolz

good one ji :)
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby sweet_heart30384 » January 27th, 2010, 4:07 pm

sohna likhya bai ji
ਤੇਰੇਆਂ ਖਿਆਲਾਂ ਵਿਚ ਪੱਕਾ ਡੇਰਾ ਲਾਉਣਾ ਏ,, ਉਂਝ ਭਾਵੇਂ ਦੁਨੀਆਂ ਤੇ ਮੁੜ ਕੇ ਨਹੀ ਆਉਣਾ ਏ..
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Re: Punjabi Poetry/Lyrics by Jaspreet K Mann

Postby psdullat » January 27th, 2010, 10:01 pm

bahut sohna likheya ji par ik chhoti jehi galti aa
eh galti mainly hindi filma waleya ne bahut jayda keeti aa .. te tusi vi last rachan vich kar gaye

ਪੰਜਾਬੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੁੰਡੇ ਨੂੰ 'ਵੇ' ਕਹਿ ਕੇ ਬੁਲਾਇਆ ਜਾਂਦਾ

ਪਰ

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