Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby dollysandhu » September 29th, 2009, 6:46 pm

shukriya mundi saab thoda k tusi eh rachnawa sade nal share krde o :)
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Patang dedicated to my firend Late Sunny Grewal

Postby ramandeep mundi » December 14th, 2009, 8:10 pm

main ik patang haan yaro mainu neeli shat wala udaunda hai.........
ohda jiven jee karda mainu peya ghumaunda hai...........

kadi kadi ohde akhey lagg main door udari la laina....
jad ohda jee karda main a dharti te phir behna...
ohde dil diyan ohi jann da oh ki ki nach nachunda hai......
main ik patang haan yaro......

ohna chir hi udd sakdan jadon tak hai ohne dor farhi........
jad dor ohne hathon shad ti..tutt sah di jani pher larhi......
kittey vakh na karde apney ton ehi soch k dil ghabraunda hai..........
main ik patang haan yaro.......

meri jind eh adh vichkar kharhi ik tunka la de sunn malik...
hun hor ni udna chahunda main kar dor le kathi hunn malik.....
tere kadmaa vich rakh cir devaan man ehi chahunda hai.........
main ik patang haan yaro mainu neeli shatt wala udaunda hai........
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby Sukhjeet Brar » December 14th, 2009, 8:16 pm

kadi kadi ohde akhey lagg main door udari la laina....
jad ohda jee karda main a dharti te phir behna...
ohde dil diyan ohi jann da oh ki ki nach nachunda hai......
main ik patang haan yaro......


Khoob likhya raman veer
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby ramandeep mundi » December 14th, 2009, 8:27 pm

thanks veer..............kal mere bachpan de dost di india ch death ho gyi .........australia ton geya c 2 ku din pehlan hi.........eh main ohde lyi likhi a........I DEDICATE THE POEM 'PATANG' TO MY FRIEND SUNNY GREWAL.......
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby dollysandhu » December 15th, 2009, 11:15 am

thode dost sunny baare sun k dukh hoya ramandeep, parmatma ohna di atma nu shaanti bakshe..te thode wallo aapne dost nu dedicated bahut wdhia tribute hai
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby Sukhjeet Brar » December 15th, 2009, 11:44 am

Sunny di aatma nu rabb shanti bakshe...dost layi ek bauhtt bhavpuran shardhanjhali bent keeti...
ਮੈਂ ਅਗਿਆਨੀ ਗਵਾਰ ਹੂੰ ,ਬੱਸ ਕਹੂੰ ਤੂੰ-ਤੂੰ....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby harkaran_singh » December 18th, 2009, 2:02 pm

veer g ruh kande kahade hogye padh ke.. bahut hi wadiya dedication ae sunny g waste .. ajj app g nu padh k bahut hi changa lageya aprmatam app g di klam nu taraki te sunny g di atma nu shanti bakhshe.. sach ae veer g bachpan di dosti bhul k v nahi bhuldi.. patang de jariye apne dill de ehsaas nu bhut khoob byan kitaa hai g..
rabb rakha.

ਮੈਂ 'ਮੇਰੀ' ਤੇ 'ਉਸਦੀ' ਕਹਾਣੀ ਲਿਖਦਾ ਹਾਂ , ਇਕ ਦੂਜੇ ਨੂੰ ਕਿੰਝ ਤੜਪਾ ਕੇ ਵਿੱਛੜ ਗਏ..
ਸਭ ਪੁੱਛਦੇ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਤੂੰ ਕੀ ਪਿਆਰ ਚੋਂ ਖੱਟਿਆ ਹੈ ,ਉਹ ਮੇਰੇ ਹੱਥ 'ਕਲਮ' ਫੜਾ ਕੇ ਵਿੱਛੜ ਗਏ..


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lohri.......

Postby ramandeep mundi » January 16th, 2010, 5:33 am

lohriyan payi ji loko lohriyan.....
putt jammey tan laddo vando,dhi jammey gheyo reyoriyan....
lohriyan payo ji loko lohriyan......

ayo sarrey ral k appan dhi de shagan mna layiye..
puttan vangoo ral mil sarrey dhi di lohri pa layiye...
kukh ch na tusi mari javo reh na javan thoriyan.....
lohriyan payo ji loko lohriyan......

D.C. , M.P. , Doctor ,Pilot,sab uchey auhdey pa rahiyan....
mundeya naalon ghat ni kuriyan desh di shaan vdha rahiyan.....
sachi gal hun desh mere diyan ehna hath ne doriyan.....
lohriyan payo ji loko lohriyan........


plz complete it ......khaas kar k kuriyan plzzz tusi apne wallon ehde ch kuch likho kavita poori karo plz..........
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby ujjal » January 16th, 2010, 7:25 pm

bahut khoob likya hai mundi saab....
ਮੇਰੇ ਸਬਦ ਮੇਰੀ ਦਾਸਤਾਨ ਬਿਆਨ ਕਰ ਰਹੇ ਨੇ , ਮੇਰੀ ਅੱਖ ਦੇ ਹੰਝੂ ਸਬ ਨੂੰ ਹੈਰਾਨ ਕਰ ਰਹੇ ਨੇ..
ਲੋਕੀ ਨੀ ਸੀ ਜਾਣਦੇ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਅੱਜ ਤੋ ਪਹਿਲਾਂ, ਮੇਰੀਆਂ ਨਾਜ਼ਮਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਪੜ ,ਹੁਣ ਸਬ ਸਲਾਮ ਕਰ ਰਹੇ ਨੇ..

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby Balvi » January 17th, 2010, 3:26 am

plz complete it ......khaas kar k kuriyan plzzz tusi apne wallon ehde ch kuch likho kavita poori karo plz..........
ramandeep koshish kar rahi si main is nu puri karan di,

mapeyan de dukh sukh wandhaundian,
sabh di ehe sukh manondian,
na paun mathe te kade ih tiorhian.
lohriyan payo ji loko lohriyan........

aao sare ral kasman khayie,
dheean di vi lohrhi payie,
dheeyan putran vich farak na kariye,
aao kariye inna diaya reejha purian
lohriyan payo ji loko lohriyan........
Rab rakha fakkran da
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby sweet_heart30384 » January 17th, 2010, 12:06 pm

sohna likhya bai ji

balvi ji ne vi sattran bahut khoob jorriyaan ne
ਤੇਰੇਆਂ ਖਿਆਲਾਂ ਵਿਚ ਪੱਕਾ ਡੇਰਾ ਲਾਉਣਾ ਏ,, ਉਂਝ ਭਾਵੇਂ ਦੁਨੀਆਂ ਤੇ ਮੁੜ ਕੇ ਨਹੀ ਆਉਣਾ ਏ..
ਪਰ ਨੈਣਾਂ ਵਿਚੋਂ ਸਦਾ, ਹੰਝੂ ਬਣ ਵਗੇਂਗੀ, ਅੱਖੋਂ ਹੋ ਜੂੰ ਓਹਲੇ, ਪਰ ਦਿਲੋਂ ਕਿਵੇਂ ਕੱਢੇਂਗੀ......

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby ramandeep mundi » January 18th, 2010, 12:22 am

haanji tuhada bhut bhut thanks ji tusi kavita pasand kitti a......balvi ji tusi vadhiya likheya meharbaani ji tuhadi ........kuriyan nu main es kar k kavita poori karn nu likheya c kyon k kuriyan es topic te jiyada ni likhdiyan mundey pata ni kyon es topic te likhde rehnde a par kuriyan kuriyan lyi hi ni likhdiyan,,kavita oddan main v poori kar sakda c par main eh dekhna chahunda haan k kiniyan ku kuriyan es topic te likhdiyan ne tusi likheya tuhada shukriya......rabb tuhanu khush rakhey......
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby harkaran_singh » January 20th, 2010, 6:21 pm

bahut khoob 22g...

ਮੈਂ 'ਮੇਰੀ' ਤੇ 'ਉਸਦੀ' ਕਹਾਣੀ ਲਿਖਦਾ ਹਾਂ , ਇਕ ਦੂਜੇ ਨੂੰ ਕਿੰਝ ਤੜਪਾ ਕੇ ਵਿੱਛੜ ਗਏ..
ਸਭ ਪੁੱਛਦੇ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਤੂੰ ਕੀ ਪਿਆਰ ਚੋਂ ਖੱਟਿਆ ਹੈ ,ਉਹ ਮੇਰੇ ਹੱਥ 'ਕਲਮ' ਫੜਾ ਕੇ ਵਿੱਛੜ ਗਏ..


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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby jagdeep101 » January 20th, 2010, 10:14 pm

Bada vadiya likhde o bai g,likhde raho ta ki mere varge vi kuch sikh sakhan,eho jahiyan rachnava padh ke.
ਫੁੱਲਾਂ ਨਾਲੋਂ ਸੋਹਲ ਯਾਰਾ ਸਾਡੇ ਜਜ਼ਬਾਤ ਨੇ......
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby sidddip » January 21st, 2010, 11:09 am

eh dhee da eh putt da faraz nibhaundian ne,
kisi v kam ton na eh kudian ghabrundian ne,
oh loko kudian jaggoo rehgian thodian,
lohriyan payo ji loko lohriyan

kush Docter bania kush bania engineer ne,
kujh ne ma peo da naam roshan keeta,
kujh mapean ne kukh che he maria ne,
oh na fir dhardhi te bahudian,
lohriyan payo ji loko lohriyan


baiji thodi jahi koshish keeti a, jepasand na ayee tan daseo asin remove kardange :P

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby dollysandhu » January 21st, 2010, 7:42 pm

bahut wdhia ji...te baki members ne v sohni koshish kiti e ji :D
well done guys !!!!

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sidhi jehi gal a.......

Postby ramandeep mundi » January 22nd, 2010, 5:33 am

meharbani tuhadi harkarn veer,jagdeep veer,harpinderjit ji .... tusi app v koshish karo likhan di kuch......horan hi kahi janey o.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...harpinder ji tusi vadhiya likheya delete karn di koi load ni......jagdeep veere sag ik doojey ton hi sikhde a main tuhade ton tusi mere ton.............main tan veer jo man ch aunnda likh dina tuhanu changa lagda mainu hor ki chahida...............rabb tuhanu sareyan nu khush rakhey.....

yaari layiye tan sirrey launi chahidi a....
nahi yaari laun da ki fayida...
gal kariye tan gal samjauni chahidi di a...
nahi baat koi paun da ki fayida.....

pavey load tan pairran heith cir dhar do...
nahi pagg vattaun da ki fayida....
j koi akh v kar j tan cir vadh do.....
nahi bhain vnaunn da ki fayida....

j mandhey bol hi bolney din vich tu...
subah rabb dhiyaun da ki fayida.....
gharey bapu te maa di izzat koi ni........
matha guru ghar tikaun di ki fayida.........
matha guru ghar tikaun da ki fayida..........
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby Balvi » January 27th, 2010, 1:46 am

sohna likheya hai ramandeep ji
Rab rakha fakkran da
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby dollysandhu » January 27th, 2010, 1:44 pm

bahut wdhia likheya raman :)
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Ramandeep Mundi

Postby sweet_heart30384 » January 27th, 2010, 3:47 pm

pavey load tan pairaan heith sir dhar do...
nahi pagg vattaun da ki fayida....
j koi akh v kar j tan sir vadh do.....
nahi bhain banaun da ki fayida....


bahut wadiya bai ji
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