Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 3rd, 2011, 12:38 pm

thx tuhada sarvar gill bai te singhgp bai,,,,,bhut bhut shukria tuhada.....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 4th, 2011, 2:10 pm

Main eh kush k chand lina likhyan Hun,, shayad tuhanu pasand aungiyan.....

Tittle : Jawani

Ghar diya de sir te tension pe gyi,,
Jdo college ch mundey ne admission le lyi,,
Class vich kuriya de Murry sangy,,
Chardi jawani ch pair pa liya, roj pe jandey pangey,,

class koi Lani nai, bethna roj canteeni,
Thekey di nai, ghar di kdii pinni,,
Mashook nalo yarr Hun kaley changey
chardi jawani ch Hun roj pendy pangy,,

Akhan ch lali, mush hamesha khardi,,
Tahi ta har kuri mitran te mardi,,
Kut kut velliyan de kr dity din mandeey,,
Chardi jawani ch Hun roz pendey pangey,,

Bullet thaley te kali nagni da ek sahara,,
Lal pari to bina Hun nai koi gujara,,
"Gopi" turiyee yarra nal mila k kandhey,,
Chardi jawani ch pair pa liya, roz pendy pangy....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 5th, 2011, 12:34 pm

Tittle :  Pardes
Kiney saal ho pardesi aya nu,,
Kisey wal v diyan nahi gya,,
Saver nu yarra 12 ghantey di shift Lani aa,,
Mtlab veley kuri pushy, bhaji eh bus kider nu jani aa,,,,

Har koi ithy apna matlab kaddda,,
Fer bai hi apney bai nu badda,,
Fer bai ne hi dujy koi bai di hi chugli lani aa,,
Fer kuri pushy bhaji eh bus kider nu jani aa,,

Kam kar ta shado, kaprey v app dhoney aa,
Dukh bhut is zindgi ch, oh dukhrey kis de kol roney aa,,
Bhul janda kdi kdi k sajjna di gani v gal ch pani aa,,
Fer kuri pushy bhaji eh bus kider nu jani aa,,

Maa bap ta ithy sariyan nu chetyy aundey aa,,
Sukh jiha milda jad oh Manu apney gal nal laundey aa,,
Kar deni nafrat sari khatam "Gopi" ithy,,
Te piyar wali pardesi hawa chala deni aa,,
Fer na koi kuri pushey bhaji eh bus kider nu jani aa,,,,
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby Sarvar_Gill » March 5th, 2011, 1:22 pm

Baiji main te tuhada fan ho geya...

ਫੇਰ ਨਾ ਕੋਈ ਕੁੜੀ ਪੁਛੇ ਇਹ ਬਸ ਕਿਧਰ ਨੂੰ ਜਾਣੀ ਆ..

ਚੜ੍ਹਦੀ ਜਵਾਨੀ 'ਚ ਪੈਰ ਪਾ ਲਿਆ, ਰੋਜ ਪੈਂਦੇ ਪੰਗੇ...

Is tarah lag reha bai tusi ehna kavitavan vich meri zindagi di hi gall kar rahe ho.

Baiji ki main tuhada asli naam jaan sakda haan?
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 5th, 2011, 1:42 pm

hanji sarver bai ji,, bhut bhut shukrira tuhada comments krn da,, bai mera asli nam "Gurpreet singh" hai,,,I am from Australia (sydney)....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby Sarvar_Gill » March 5th, 2011, 1:45 pm

Baiji Thanks for replying
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 5th, 2011, 1:47 pm

sarver bai ek gal dso,, jo main likhya is nal tuhda koi relation hai kya????
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 5th, 2011, 2:05 pm

Tittle : Larayii

ek piyar kita c tere nal,,
changi nahi kiti tu mere nal,,
hor nahi hun badnami asi sehni,
te pishey tere nahi larayi mol leni,,,

sara kush krk dekh liya tere layi,,
ek udeek nahi kr saki mere layi,,
jandi warii tanu ek gal c kehni,,
te pishey tere nahi larayi mol leni,,

larayi krk college ch badnami khati main,,
lag gyi 851 te jail ch sajja katti main,,
yarr ho gye tabah, tanu koi fikar nai peni,,
hor nahi pishey tere layi larayi mol leni,,

ghar diya to giya te main yarra dosta to v giya,,
tu c ek per main tere hathon v giya,,
na piyar krna "Gopi" zindgi ch
te na hi eh zind nimani kisey nal lani,,
fer nahi pishey tere larayi mol leni

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby Sarvar_Gill » March 5th, 2011, 7:47 pm

GopiSydney wrote:sarver bai ek gal dso,, jo main likhya is nal tuhda koi relation hai kya????


bai ji tuhaade gaane parh ke college de din yaad aa jaande...
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 6th, 2011, 6:54 am

college de din ta har ek nu yadd aundey aa sarvar bai jii,,,oh din ta kisey nu v nahi bhuldey,,chahey asi pardesi bethy hoyiee,,kity na kity din yadd aa hi jandey aa,, fer dil udas hoo janda aa din ayadd krk,, kiyoki eh din kadi vapis nahi auneyy....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 6th, 2011, 7:05 am

Tittle : Tarey
pheli takni ch mera dil thag liya,,
duji takni ch yarr mang liya,,
hun nahi reh hunda bin tere,,
rati uth uth k ginda tarey,,

sari sari rat jagdiyan nikal jandi,,
fer v neendar akh ch na pendi,,
firdey aa than than tere marey,,
hun tere bajon sada dil na lagey,,
rati uth uth k ginda tarey,,

teri gali vicho apa jan jan lagna,,
sohna jiha lgda tera nivi pa k sagna,,
call krk tanu phone ch pasey muka te sarey,,
hun tere bajon sada dil na lgey,,
rati uth uth ginda main tarey,,

2 vajy roj tere college murey auna,,
hath jiha hila k milan da ishara jiha krna,,
kamla ho gya "Gopi", kr te mundey kamley sarey,,
hun tere bajo sada dil na lgey,,
rati uth uth ginda main tarey,,

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 7th, 2011, 3:37 am

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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby Sukhjeet Brar » March 7th, 2011, 11:46 am

likhta vich college di kaafi gall keeti gayi hai .
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 7th, 2011, 12:23 pm

college di gal sukhjeet bai ji iss krk kiti hai kiyo ki college di din kadi vapis nahi auney,, yarra dostan nal, canteen ch behna, gallan krniya, class ch jana eh din kdi nahi auney,,,,bus likh k yadd kr layida.........thx for ur comments sukhjit bai ji....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby rocky16 » March 10th, 2011, 2:25 am

wadhia likhea bai jeee...
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 20th, 2011, 10:42 am

Tittle : Chandigarh 

Pheli takni de nazarey hundy c,
Har than charchy tere barey hundy c,,

Kala Surma, juti kadwi pa lyi tu,,
Sector 17 di Geri la lyi tu,,
Chari jawani tere te billo kehar di,,
Patt layi kuri Chandigarh shaher di,,

Aa Beth bullet te tanu sair krrawa,,
Rati utha te Teri khair manawa,,
Hook jihi dil vich ruk ruk thardi,,
Pat lyi kuri chandigarh shaher di,,

Fashion  har roz tu krdi,
G star te hamesha Teri akh khardi,,
Tanu paun lyi zind Sadi mardi,,
Patt layi kuri Chandigarh shaher di,,

Pishey tere university ch dakhla le liya,,
Nit tere pshey koi panga pa liya,,
Tahi "Gopi" di akh Teri nal lardi,,,
Tahi ta patt lyi kuri Chandigarh shaher di
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 22nd, 2011, 2:16 pm

Tittle : True

jo v likhda aa main sahi likhda aa,,
juth nahi, iss wich hamesha sach dikhda aa
sachi gal main loka tak puchayii,,
meri hath jor k bentii aa,,
meriyan likhtan di koi copy na kriyo bai,,

ishq wali gal v likhi,,
maa boli nu puri izzat diti,,
putty jiney toyee dujyan layii,,
oh digya vich aapp khayii,,
meri hath jor k bentti aa,,
meriyan likhtan di koi copy na kriyo baii,,

dil jo aunda likh daiyda,,
kisey da kaha nai morida,,
sachi gal krk k bhut izzat kamayii,,
meri hath jor k bentti aa,,
meriyan likhtan di koi copy na kriyo baii,,

meriyan likhtan ch udasi v aa te kushi v aa,,
meriyan likhtan main v te tusi v aa,,
"Nazar" likhat nal main pheli kalam chalyii,,
meri hath jor k bentti aa,,
meriyan likhtan di koi copy na kriyo baii,,

kity kity maa di gall kiti main,,
nashey pattey to door rahida,,
kadey daru nahi pitti main,,
mehar rakhi "Gopi" te mere saii,,
meri hath jor k bentti aa,,
meriyan likhtan di koi copy na kriyo baii,,
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby Sukhjeet Brar » March 26th, 2011, 1:59 pm

GopiSydney wrote:meri hath jor k bentti aa,,
meriyan likhtan di koi copy na kriyo baii,,

Nakal waleya nu benti.. aah kamm vi soot hai !!
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 26th, 2011, 6:23 pm

Tittle :  Til

Tera thodi wala til, 
Sada manga ey dil,
Tera lak da hulara,
Ptya Chandigarh Sara ,,

Tere gallan uty lali,
Sadi roj hundi Diwali,
Firda tere pishy Mara,
Ptya Chandigarh Sara,,

HTC wala phone tere kol,
Ta Black wala iPhone mere kol,
Shmita shetty da chaley gana sha ra ra,,
Jado da ptya chandigarh Sara,,

Rakho TNu bna k jaan,,
Na kri apni Surat te Maan,
Nai landa "Gopi" tanu Lara,,
Jdo da ptya Chandigarh Sara....
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Re: Punjabi Poetry by Gurpreet

Postby GopiSydney » March 27th, 2011, 6:43 am

Tittle : Australian Permanent Residency

bari kushi hoyi jad australia da visa lg gya,,
fer ghar diya de akhan vich hanju vagg gya,,
pind sajjan shad dity te kai shadd ditey yarr ni,,
rule change ho gyee yarroo
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

2 saal krni hi peni cc parayiii,,
vich OZ de aa k rakhni c puri charayiiii,,
kam te jaan lyi hun lyi car nii,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

cookery krk hun diploma shuru kr liya,,
TR pani c, per TRA ne vichey jar liya,,
kiyoki each 6 band hatho gabroo giya harr ni,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

ithy aa k sadey bahg gye futty,,
fer visa renew krwa liya study base utty,,
khetan wali dihari eh kidan da kam kar ni,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

20 ghanty kam ithy mily na koi jiyada,,
kita c milney da sajjana nu vada,,
pura na hoya vada gabroo giya hatho harr nii,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

pind jaan nu dil bhut krda,,
ticket da rate dekh dil bhut darda,,
kdaye rabb v sunuga sadi pukaar ni,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

aa gayi warii hun fees den di,,
pe gyi lor tere mere kolo doller len di,,
rule badldey "Gopi" har mahiny char ni,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

vakeel kehnda gori nal kr layo viah ni,,
milo PR fer liyo sukh da sah ni,,
200 doller de k shutey "Gopi"
jad gori nal kityan akhan char ni,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

roti di ta sanu shakal v bhul gyi,,
zind sadi hun ghanteyan ch rul gyi,,
katni zind ithy wang tikhi dhar ni,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

sponsership ta ithy har koi labda,,
kehnda PR to bad dekhi main kina fabda,,
issey lyi agenta ne apney rate kr dity Hazaar ni,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

goryan nu ki kehna apney desi att chaki jandey,,
desi, desi de hi vatt kadi jandey,,
kasoor kisey da nahi sarey eko rassi de saar ni,,
rule change ho gyee yaroo,,
hun nahi milni Australia di PR ni,,

honsla jiha krk file England di la diti,,
study visa nahi sidhi pakki file pa diti,,
8 mahiney badd "Gopi" ho gya jugar nii,,
rule change ho gyee, hun koi gal nahi,,
kiyoki yarra nu mil gayi England di PR ni....
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