Poetry by Deep

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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby prabh mahil » May 30th, 2010, 8:23 pm

kaim bai sachi garmi ne matt mari a but likhde riho
Gham to insaan k jeene ki saza hoty hai "DOST"

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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby PawanKumar » May 30th, 2010, 11:02 pm

deep_bathindian wrote:
aakhir sarkar ne sharam utari.
hun bijli da cut lagda varo-vari.
bina balan to tpda chulla,dharti machdi sari.
ki tainu haal dsa,meri garmi ne matt maari.

lagne thermal plant 4 nve,v afwahaa hi udiyyan.
rabb v meenh ni paunda,vekh lyiaa'n fook-2 gudiyaa'n.
es rutte ta thande rehnde bas daftar sarkari.
ki tainu haal dsa,meri garmi ne matt maari.

rabb di v jive mashook russ gyi a.
aini pehla nai c garmi,jini es var pyi.
"deep" j odo boote laaye hunde,hun mil jandi shaa udhari.
ki tainu haal dsa,meri garmi ne matt maari..
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby Rubinder Kahlon » May 30th, 2010, 11:11 pm

bahut vadia deep veere gud kaim aa

sahi gal aa garmi ne te att kiti hoyi aa utton bijli de cut
ਕਦੇ ਵੀ ਕਿਸੇ ਦਾ ਮਾੜਾ ਨਹੀਂਓਂ ਤੱਕਦੇ
ਓਹਦੀ ਰਜ਼ਾ ਵਿੱਚ ਰਹਿੰਦੇ ਸਦਾ ਹੱਸਦੇ
ਸਾਨੂੰ ਪੱਗਾਂ ਫੱਬਦੀਆਂ ਨੇ ਸਾਡੀ ਵੱਖਰੀ ਟੌਰ ਨਵਾਬੀ
ਸਾਡੀ ਕੌਮ ਹੈ ਸ਼ੇਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਕਹਿੰਦੇ ਲੋਕ ਪੰਜਾਬੀ
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby SanDugri » May 30th, 2010, 11:38 pm

Boht vadhiaa 22 ji
Lagda Bijle Gyi te e eh Kavita likhi aa :P

nave khoon te makhol Masti di garmi,,,
air condition caar ch v ,,,
VIP number te laal batti di garmi ,,,
mundeya aj kal deya di eho bimaari hai
deep sehaan matt teri kalle di ni
Es garmi ne matt sareyan di maari hai




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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby jimmymandair1985 » May 30th, 2010, 11:42 pm

hahahahahaa boht wadiya sandeep veere ..
ਤੈਨੂੰ ਕੀ ਦੱਸੀਏ ਨੀ ਜਿੰਦਗੀ ਸਾਡੀ, ਕਿੰਝ ਰਹੀ ਏ ਬੀਤ ਕੁੜੇ ...ਇੱਕ ਆਉਂਦੀ ਤੇਰੀ ਯਾਦ ਬੜੀ, ਬਾਕੀ ਤਾਂ ਸਭ ਕੁਝ ਠੀਕ ਕੁੜੇ ..

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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby kudi punjaban » May 30th, 2010, 11:55 pm

booooooooooooooooooooooo ve nakhatua,, tu tan kamaal hi krti
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby deep_bathindian » May 31st, 2010, 6:32 pm

thanku sarea da..te special thanks puneet da...........lolz..nakhtua :P
my latest poem "check kri rabba" :P poetry-deep-t1619.html
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby pamsidhu » May 31st, 2010, 6:42 pm

very nice 22ji...bahot sohna likeya.
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby cute_jatti » May 31st, 2010, 6:47 pm

bahut wadhiyaaa likheya deep ji :)
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby deep_bathindian » May 31st, 2010, 10:11 pm

thnku sidhu 22...and tina...
my latest poem "check kri rabba" :P poetry-deep-t1619.html
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby kudi punjaban » June 2nd, 2010, 10:53 pm

masla privateeeeeeeee,,,,,,,goood deep
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby deep_bathindian » June 3rd, 2010, 9:09 pm

thnku puneet ...padan lyi...:)
my latest poem "check kri rabba" :P poetry-deep-t1619.html
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby libran_brar » June 3rd, 2010, 10:31 pm

wah wah!!! kya haal-e-dil,, i mean haal-e-garmi byan kitaaa aa,,,
very very good :) keep it up sassiye alias deep :P
ਕੀਰਤ ਬਰਾੜ

ਤੀਆਂ ਅਤੇ ਤਰਿੰਜਣਾਂ ਆਪਾਂ ਭੁੱਲ ਗਏ ਆਂ,
ਵੈਸਟਰਨ ਵਾਲੇ ਵਿਰਸੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਡੁੱਲ ਗਏ ਆਂ,
ਕੋਈ ਨਾ ਜਾਣੇ ਸਾਨੂੰ ਸੱਭਿਆਚਾਰ ਬਿਨ੍ਹਾਂ,
ਚਰਖਾ ਰੋਂਦਾ ਵੇਖਿਆ ਮੈਂ ਮੁਟਿਆਰ ਬਿਨ੍ਹਾਂ......
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby deep_bathindian » June 5th, 2010, 9:01 pm

thnku kirat..hun thik hogi garmi sade...33 degree reh gya..meenh pai gya :)
my latest poem "check kri rabba" :P poetry-deep-t1619.html
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby sweet_heart30384 » June 5th, 2010, 9:06 pm

deep_bathindian wrote:
aakhir sarkar ne sharam utari.
hun bijli da cut lagda varo-vari.
bina balan to tpda chulla,dharti machdi sari.
ki tainu haal dsa,meri garmi ne matt maari.

lagne thermal plant 4 nve,v afwahaa hi udiyyan.
rabb v meenh ni paunda,vekh lyiaa'n fook-2 gudiyaa'n.
es rutte ta thande rehnde bas daftar sarkari.
ki tainu haal dsa,meri garmi ne matt maari.

rabb di v jive mashook russ gyi a.
aini pehla nai c garmi,jini es var pyi.
"deep" j odo boote laaye hunde,hun mil jandi shaa udhari.
ki tainu haal dsa,meri garmi ne matt maari..
:x


good one deep beere
ਥਾਂ ਥਾਂ ਹੋਏ ਬਦਨਾਮ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਪਿਆਰ ਕਰ ਕੇ,, ਰੋਗੀ ਉਮਰਾਂ ਦੇ ਹੋਏ ਅੱਖਾਂ ਚਾਰ ਕਰਕੇ
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby saggu » June 5th, 2010, 10:58 pm

hahaha....ballee bai.....kaim aa likhea....
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby amligrewal » June 6th, 2010, 12:43 pm

good aa bai... kaim aaaa....
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby deep_bathindian » June 7th, 2010, 8:41 pm

thnku..sweet,, saggu,, te amli 22 :P
my latest poem "check kri rabba" :P poetry-deep-t1619.html
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kite kalli beh k.........

Postby deep_bathindian » June 8th, 2010, 11:12 pm

jive koi bijli dig pve,koi toofan nuksaan kr jave.
kuj is tra hi khyaal tera pareshaan kr jave.

kde krde c ishq-2 bahut jo,
ajj ehi shabd bejubaan kar jave.

kite kalli beh k sochan lyi jo aakh gya,
ohnu kaho aakhri ik ehsaan kar jave.

o aaya c "deep", jo lahoo dolda yaari te,
ohnu kaho meri talli to saaf laal rang de nishaan kar jave.
my latest poem "check kri rabba" :P poetry-deep-t1619.html
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Re: Poetry by Deep

Postby saggu » June 8th, 2010, 11:58 pm

kde krde c ishq-2 bahut jo,
ajj ehi shabd bejubaan kar jave.


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